One thing I learned about you is you are a very relaxed person who can also be very professional. Your family is similar than mine because we tend to let our "crazy sides" shine. The best thing about your digital story is definitely the music selection and transitions. It certainly helped me understand your personality and it showed your interested in music. One thing you could change is show more pictures of family dinners instead of using an image of a very yummy dinner. I felt it would have emphasizes the importance of large family meals. Something you might want to do if you have the time to make this small change. Thank you for sharing!
Outstanding video Josh! I can definitely relate to playing with Legos as a child. Your music choice was fantastic and the ending of the video was perfect!
One thing I learned about you is that you come from a deeply religious family. Your family is similar to mine because we also have big family gatherings. The best things about your digital story are the music selection/animation. One thing you could change is...some of the transitions moved too quickly to read.
You have I have A LOT in common: musical talent, hunting, Christian upbringing, and having a family where being crazy is preferred. I love the way you looped your poem around to end as it began. There was one slide that I didn't get everything read on, but I really enjoyed learning about you
Great Job!! I enjoyed the Christmas part of the video. Since becoming a parent it has become my favorite holiday and shown me the true meaning of the holiday, Family!!!
Your video was very nice. Every thing was easy to read and flowed well. I liked that you called your house "the Christmas" house. I've always loved the people that go all out for Christmas. I can relate to the family dinners with way to much food. I love the way that you ended your video. It was a very powerful phrase to leave viewers with.
One thing I learned is how much you seem to enjoy Christmas. One thing our familys have in common is that we both seem to have a crazy, goofy family. One thing I liked about your story was how you tied in the beginning sentence with the last sentence, that was a great idea. I liked the music but it seemed a little somber for your story, but overall I really liked it. Great job!
The music, so solemn yet passionate; had to watch it twice because the first time I ignored the video and took a few minutes to simply enjoy. Back your story! Christmas house, I dig it; love the holiday, love the festivities, I smelled pine needles and could hear my dad's train running through my memories. Very well done, I've come to expect that from you and your work.
Good video I also played with legos growing up. I learned your from the Clarksburg area. We also had big family gatherings with too much food to eat. Good video.
I learned that you really like Christmas and you really enjoy your family gatherings. I liked the way you ended the video, reprising the first line of the poem as your last line. Your family is similar to mine because my family loves Christmas time as well.
One thing I learned about you is you are a very relaxed person who can also be very professional.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar than mine because we tend to let our "crazy sides" shine.
The best thing about your digital story is definitely the music selection and transitions. It certainly helped me understand your personality and it showed your interested in music.
One thing you could change is show more pictures of family dinners instead of using an image of a very yummy dinner. I felt it would have emphasizes the importance of large family meals. Something you might want to do if you have the time to make this small change.
Thank you for sharing!
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ReplyDeleteOutstanding video Josh! I can definitely relate to playing with Legos as a child. Your music choice was fantastic and the ending of the video was perfect!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy the poem you wrote. The pictures went along with the poem very well. The beginning and ending of your video fit so perfect. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you come from a deeply religious family.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar to mine because we also have big family gatherings.
The best things about your digital story are the music selection/animation.
One thing you could change is...some of the transitions moved too quickly to read.
You have I have A LOT in common: musical talent, hunting, Christian upbringing, and having a family where being crazy is preferred. I love the way you looped your poem around to end as it began. There was one slide that I didn't get everything read on, but I really enjoyed learning about you
ReplyDeleteGreat Job!! I enjoyed the Christmas part of the video. Since becoming a parent it has become my favorite holiday and shown me the true meaning of the holiday, Family!!!
ReplyDeleteYour video was very nice. Every thing was easy to read and flowed well. I liked that you called your house "the Christmas" house. I've always loved the people that go all out for Christmas. I can relate to the family dinners with way to much food. I love the way that you ended your video. It was a very powerful phrase to leave viewers with.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned is how much you seem to enjoy Christmas.
ReplyDeleteOne thing our familys have in common is that we both seem to have a crazy, goofy family.
One thing I liked about your story was how you tied in the beginning sentence with the last sentence, that was a great idea.
I liked the music but it seemed a little somber for your story, but overall I really liked it. Great job!
The music, so solemn yet passionate; had to watch it twice because the first time I ignored the video and took a few minutes to simply enjoy. Back your story! Christmas house, I dig it; love the holiday, love the festivities, I smelled pine needles and could hear my dad's train running through my memories. Very well done, I've come to expect that from you and your work.
ReplyDeleteGood video I also played with legos growing up. I learned your from the Clarksburg area. We also had big family gatherings with too much food to eat. Good video.
ReplyDeleteI learned that you really like Christmas and you really enjoy your family gatherings. I liked the way you ended the video, reprising the first line of the poem as your last line. Your family is similar to mine because my family loves Christmas time as well.
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